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You looked at him and smiled brightly at his answer, although you were slightly blushing and he was too.
"Yay! Come on big bruder! (name)! We have to get started." Lilly cheered dragging the two of you to the living room.
"Okay bruder, you have to pretend your coming home, but first we have to get things ready." Lilly said pushing him out of the door.
"Okay, okay." Vash said still slightly blushing.
Lilly closed the door and the two of you hurried to get things ready in both the living room and kitchen.
Lilly went and gave the okay to Vash and then she went to the living room and played with her dolls.
"Honey I'm home." Vash said and that was your cue.
"Hello honey, welcome home." You said imitating what Hungary says to Austria when he got home. You smiled at him shyly as he hung his coat. Lilly came in and yelled, "Daddy you're home!"
"Hello honey." He said smiling at Lilly as she hugged him.
You hugged him next and smiled.
"How was your day?" You asked walking with him.
"Wait! You guys have to kiss hello!" Lilly said making the two of you blush madly again.
"Do we really?" You asked shyly. Lilly nodded and you knew there would be no room for arguments. You got up on your tip toes (barely reaching his face) and kissed his blushing red cheek. He then leaned over and kissed your cheek too. The both of you were blushing madly and Lilly smiled happily.
"So how was your day?" You asked again smiling and taking him to sit in the living room.
"It was okay, glad to be home." He said smiling a bit and then his stomach growled.
"Good, would you like anything to eat. I can make some soup." You said shyly. Thank god Hungary taught you how to cook and Feli helped too.
"Are you sure, your not too tired." Vash said.
"No honey, I don't mind. Just watch Lilly and I'll make the soup." You said smiling and went off into the kitchen.

Vash sighed and looked at his little sister.
"Why did I agree to this?" He muttered to himself.
"Because you love her." Lilly said smiling at her brother.
"What! I-I...when did you find out?" he asked.
"I can see it in your eyes plus you mumble it a lot when you think no one's listening." Lilly said playing with her dolls. Vash sighed in defeat.
"Just tell her." Lilly said.
"She's younger than me." Vash said.
"Your point? Russia's older than Canada and England is older than America." Lilly said with her hands on her hips glaring at him.
"But-" Vash started.
"No buts!" Lilly said.
'No buts, you got to tell her." Lilly said.
"Soup's done!" You yelled from the kitchen.

You had set up the table and the soup was already ready to be eaten, and unkowingly to them you had listened in to their conversation.
The other two sat down and so did you. Vash tasted the soup and smiled.
"This is delicouse (name), you are an excelent cook." Vash praised.
"Thank you." You said smiling a bit at him.
The three of you ate happily and talked for a bit.
"I'll clean up." You said when the three of you were finished, you did not fail to notice the look Lilly sent Vash.
"I'll help too." He said.

The two of you cleaned up and were relitivally silent.
"So um...(name) thanks for the delicouse meal." Vash said.
"Your welcome." You said.
"...You'll make an excellent wife one day." Vash said.
"Th-thanks." You stuttered.
"So I have something to tell you." Vash said.
"What is it?" You asked a bit eagerly.
"I l-like you, a lot and I...um forget it." He said turning red yet again.
"Vash I like you too." You sai shyly.
"Really?" He asked.
"Yeah, um...maybe one day we can be real husband and wife." You said shyly.
"I'd like that." Vash said smiling at you. You looked up at him (and thank whatever god that you were on a stool so you could look him in the eyes) and smiled and kissed his cheek again.

"(name)! Mr. Austria is here." Lilly shouted.
You looked away blushing and stepped down from the stool.
"I guess we won't tell big brother Austria." you sighed.
"Not yet..." Vash said kissing your cheek and walking you out.
"I hope it wasn't a problem." Austria said stoicly taking you by the hand.
"No problem at all, hold up you forgot something (name)." Vash said.
He went to the kitchen and came back with a white box tied with a red ribbon.
"Thank you Vash." You said.
"Come on (name), say goodbye." Austria said.
"Bye Lilly, bye Vash." You said and went home with your big brother.

~Extended Ending~
When you got home you opened the box and smiled at the heart shaped chocolate that had the words 'I love you' on it. You smiled and like the little girl you were you twirled around your room and squealed a bit. Things couldn't get better.
"He loves me!" You cheered happily falling back on your bed.
"And who exactly loves you?" Big brother Austria said from the doorway.
"Um..." You said.

~*~*~*~*~*~
"Big bruder phone for you!" Lilly said and handed the phone to him.
"Hello?" He asked.
"YOU LITTLE MONGREL! HOW DARE YOU TAINT MY LITTLE (NAME)! If you wanted to court her you should have come and done things like a true gentleman!" Austria shouted.
"Well look at the brightside of this." Vash said.
"And what exactly is the brightside to all this?" Ausrtia asked.
"Atleast I'm not Prussia." Vash said.
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"...True." Austria said.

~*~*~*~*~
And in the end you and Vash lived happily ever after, at least as much as you could with an overprotective brother.
~End

So yeah I didn't know how to end this...fail =.=''
I hope you like it, and life with an overprotective brother sucks...I know I have a lot of them and sisters. Again I hope you enjoyed it! Comments will be appreciated! And so will favorites!

Disclaimer: I don't own hetalia or you

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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner 16 hours ago  Student General Artist
...did I see implied RusCan and USUK?!
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FabuEmily Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant
Austria would go apeshit if this was PrussiaXChibi!Reader
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Blooming-Sukura Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015
"At least I'm not Prussia"
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"..true"



That was the best thing ever
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Yes!
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:iconbunnygoblin:
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015
The last line was awesome.
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner May 12, 2015
"Atleast I'm not Prussia." 
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"...True." 
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CatarinaWaterFrost Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
"At least I'm not Prussia"

xD *Inhuman laughter* 
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nightcrawlerlover99 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015
At least I'm not prussia XD you killed me
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:iconkillerdonut28:
Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
I'm having a squee attack at 12:30 am, and hoping my mom doesn't hear...
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:iconkillerdonut28:
Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
Just so you know, in German grammar, the word Bruder would be capitalized no matter what.
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sanxcatxnaru4ewa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
That ending though... xDD 
I laughed soooooo hard at this, I guess my neighbours think I'm crazy now ^.^° But well, you're story was worth it ;)
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greenemerald200 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Student General Artist
AHAHAHA
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FemPortugal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD OH MY GOD! "At least I'm not Prussia." oh good lord Zeus! I couldn't breath! T-then...XD then that! "...True" OH GOD! I died!
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GAARAfangirl1017 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Haha "At least I'm not Prussia." XD that made my day ^w^
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muuu1234 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
When Austria yelled at Switzerland I was just like 'BIG BRUDER NO STOP D:'
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
APH: Onion Prussia Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] APH Prussia tackle hug prussia Prussia (Arrives to explain) [V3] APH Prussia: Sparkles APH Prussia Prussia (Explaining) [V4] prussia APH Prussia: Helmet Hetalia Prussia (Laugh) Rainbow awesome lick Awesome Face, Doctor Style Pinkie Chibi Pie Dancing APH: Onion Prussia Emotic Brandy 14:  Awesome France (I'm awesome because...) [V2] Levi Rivaille (Tornado Slash) [V1] 
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StarburstAlicorn Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
So.much.awesome.... 😛😛😗
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:iconelyanaxlevilove:
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Student Digital Artist
well, OF COURSE!
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:iconstarburstalicorn:
Vell it is zhe awesome Prussia! :D
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:iconelyanaxlevilove:
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
He does have a point at least he's not prussia
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Saya4 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Artist
u had me up to the point if prussia xDthats when i started to crack up laugjing
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Hoshiido Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist
I died at the end xD
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iwearamask10 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha at least~ how did I know austria would react like that? Hehehehe this was adorable~
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TDarkhamgirl Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist
"At least I'm not prussia"
"True" LOL HAHAHA
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Flying-Dutchmann Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
XD I laughed so hard at that part
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jessiejones20jessie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
cute
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lolamanny Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, Austria, I think you're going to be very disappointed in who my twin likes.
Austria: Wait.. Who does she like?
Me: NONE OF YOUR BEESWAX
(Hint the ending lolz~)

This was cute and hilarious! Now to read more~
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
>w< Pfft. Good point, Vash.
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 "Atleast I'm not Prussia." I DIED
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
*Dies along with you*
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Fluffies1324 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
My meals are so delicouse ( delicious ) Hatsune Miku-19 (Miku Miku Shite Ageru) 
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hammy20113 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Pfffff AHA HA HA HA HA HA HA I can see prussia on the ground covered with bullet holes HAHAHA XD
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darkruby98 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Then he'll be full of holes, like swiss cheese ^_^
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hammy20113 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Exactly
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darkruby98 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
:p
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eternalyneutral Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gawd, I love this story! XD
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hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
lol the ending
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Bubbles-Miyako Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Its true its not prussia
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Kurahei Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol! Cute story~
Omfg dat ending. :'D
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Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Cricket: Mwahahahaha! I am the overprotective sibling :XD: seriously my brother-in-law is still trying to get my approval minus the fact that I'm younger than him :XD:
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dantania-dan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm laughing so hard at the last part.
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
*thinks*
Prussia: Come with the awesome me
Me: noooooo don't touch me
Prussia: *grabs my arm and yanks me*
*Five min later*
(Prussia is on the ground full of holes)
Switzerland: don't touch my wife (lol when did switzy become Sweden?)
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deathhio Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Yeah when did he become Sweden
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
never im just his wife
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deathhio Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Ok
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
hehehe now stop reading about my husband jk hehehe
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deathhio Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Ok
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:iconanotherhetaliafan901:
That was so cute!! :iconsocute-plz: :iconsmile-luplz:
hehe Vash said he likes reader-tan!! *runs around twirling and smiling like an idiot*
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Mountainstar223 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student General Artist
AH HA HA HA HA HA HA!! Vash: atleast im not Prussia Austria:..................true. me: AH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! :D
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Italia19 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this was so KAWAII!!!!! :iconawwwplz:
now i want to see what would happen if prussia really did this..... :iconyayprussiagilbirdplz: and cue austria faint
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